Pitching a Media Product Idea to an Audience - Christmas Pitch

My Powerpoint

      

4.1 Self-critique own idea and pitch performance

I need to be confident when delivering my pitch because I sometimes roll over my woods making it difficult for the audience to understand me. I also shouldn't rush because I end up speaking too quick and people notice that i'm nervous.

My pears stated that nwxt time I should'nt constantly look at my powerpoint constantly as its not as engaging. They also stated that i could of added a few pictures into the powerpoint to make my ideas easier to understand. 

overall I thought that my pitch was great apart from some of the flaws, it had great detail and pictures it was eye catching.  An area I would improve is my shot list, its not very detailed so i need to work on that. 

My pitch was about children homelessness and this was very effective because people react more young homeless children because they are  young and its very easy to feel sympathetic towards them especially when the target audience is parents and the elderly due to the fact that they know how it feels to have young children and it would break their heart if it was their kids in that position.